Chapter 5: The Email That Could Have St## Chapter 5: The Email That Could Have Stolen My Future
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I read the email three times before I understood what it meant.
The university wasn't the email three times before I understood what it meant.
The university wasn't asking me to confirm my scholarship.
asking me to confirm my scholarship.
It was asking me to verify a request to change where part of my education funding would be sent.
According to the message, the request had been submitted four days earlier. It instructed the financial aid officeIt was asking me to verify a request to change where part of my education funding would be sent.
According to the message, the request had been submitted four days earlier. It instructed the financial aid office to route a portion of my education funds through an outside financial services company before the money reached my student account.
Northstar Financial Services.
to route a portion of my education funds through an outside financial services company before the money reached my student account.
Northstar Financial Services.
The same company connected to the lien against my mother's house.
I immediately took a screenshot.
Then I called the financial aid office.
The same company connected to the lien against my mother's house.
I immediately took a screenshot.
Then I called the financial aid office.
A woman named Patricia answered after several minutes on hold.
“Northwestern University Financial Aid. This is Patricia. How can I help you?””
“My nameA woman named Patricia answered after several minutes on hold.
“Northwestern University Financial Aid. This is Patricia. How can I help you?””
“My name is Maya Bennett. I received an email about changing the destination of my education funds, and I never requested that change.””
Her tone is Maya Bennett. I received an email about changing the destination of my education funds, and I never requested that change.””
Her tone changed immediately.
“Are you referring to the funding redirection request received on Tuesday?””
“Yes. I changed immediately.
“Are you referring to the funding redirection request received on Tuesday?””
“Yes. I didn't submit it.””
“Please hold while I review your account.””
I sat on the edge of my bed, gripping my didn't submit it.””
“Please hold while I review your account.””
I sat on the edge of my bed, gripping my phone so tightly that my fingers hurt.
Downstairs, I could hear Dad moving through the kitchen. He'd spent the last hour calling the phone so tightly that my fingers hurt.
Downstairs, I could hear Dad moving through the kitchen. He'd spent the last hour calling the bank and organizing the documents Elaine had requested.
I didn't want to give him another problem.
But this was my future.
Patricia returned to the line.
“Ms. Bennett, the bank and organizing the documents Elaine had requested.
I didn't want to give him another problem.
But this was my future.
Patricia returned to the line.
“Ms. Bennett, the request is currently pending verification. No funds have been released through the new instructions.””
I closed my eyes.
“Thank request is currently pending verification. No funds have been released through the new instructions.””
I closed my eyes.
“Thank God.””
“We received a document authorizing the change. It appears to contain your signature, along with a copy of your identification. God.””
“We received a document authorizing the change. It appears to contain your signature, along with a copy of your identification. Because the request involves a third-party financial institution, we flagged it for additional review.””
“Can you send me a Because the request involves a third-party financial institution, we flagged it for additional review.””
“Can you send me a copy of the document?””
“We'll need to follow our identity verification process, but I can explain how to submit a formal request.””
I copy of the document?””
“We'll need to follow our identity verification process, but I can explain how to submit a formal request.””
I gave her my student identification number and answered several security questions.
Then I asked the question I was afraid to hear gave her my student identification number and answered several security questions.
Then I asked the question I was afraid to hear answered.
“Did the request come from my email address?””
“No. It was submitted through an external contact address answered.
“Did the request come from my email address?””
“No. It was submitted through an external contact address.””
“Whose address?””
Patricia read it aloud.
It wasn't mine.
It wasn't Dad's.
It was an.””
“Whose address?””
Patricia read it aloud.
It wasn't mine.
It wasn't Dad's.
It was an email address belonging to Denise.
I went completely still.
“Are you sure?””
“I can confirm that this was the contact address email address belonging to Denise.
I went completely still.
“Are you sure?””
“I can confirm that this was the contact address listed on the request. I can't tell you who personally submitted it.””
“Please freeze the request. Don't send any money anywhere until I confirm everything in writing.””
“ listed on the request. I can't tell you who personally submitted it.””
“Please freeze the request. Don't send any money anywhere until I confirm everything in writing.””
“Of course. I've added a fraud review note to your file. You'll receiveOf course.
I've added a fraud review note to your file. You'll receive instructions for formally disputing the request.””
I thanked her and ended the call.
For several seconds, I instructions for formally disputing the request.””
I thanked her and ended the call.
For several seconds, I couldn't move.
Denise hadn't merely taken money from an account.
She had tried to interfere with the couldn't move.
Denise hadn't merely taken money from an account.
She had tried to interfere with the money that was supposed to get me through college.
I walked downstairs so quickly that I nearly missed the last money that was supposed to get me through college.
I walked downstairs so quickly that I nearly missed the last step.
Dad looked up from the kitchen table.
“Maya? What's wrong?””
I handed him my phone.
He read the email, then the notes I'd made during the call.
His face went pale.
step.
Dad looked up from the kitchen table.
“Maya? What's wrong?””
I handed him my phone.
He read the email, then the notes I'd made during the call.
His face went pale.
“She's trying to redirect your college funding?””
“The university caught it before they released anything.””
He sat down slowly.
“Call Elaine.””
“I already asked the university to freeze it“She's trying to redirect your college funding?””
“The university caught it before they released anything.””
He sat down slowly.
“Call Elaine.””
“I already asked the university to freeze it.””
“Good. We'll document that, too.””
He picked up his phone.
Then he stopped.
“Maya, I need.””
“Good. We'll document that, too.””
He picked up his phone.
Then he stopped.
“Maya, I need you to understand something. We don't know yet whether Denise personally submitted every document. We have evidence that these requests are you to understand something.
We don't know yet whether Denise personally submitted every document. We have evidence that these requests are connected to her contact information, but we need the university and the investigators to establish who did what.””
I nodded.
I was angry enough to believe connected to her contact information, but we need the university and the investigators to establish who did what.””
I nodded.
I was angry enough to believe the worst about Denise.
But Dad was right. If we wanted to protect my future, we needed facts that could survive more than an the worst about Denise.
But Dad was right. If we wanted to protect my future, we needed facts that could survive more than an argument in our living room.
Elaine answered on the second ring.
Dad put her on speaker and argument in our living room.
Elaine answered on the second ring.
Dad put her on speaker and explained the university email.
She asked us to forward the original message and preserve the screenshots. She also instructed explained the university email.
She asked us to forward the original message and preserve the screenshots. She also instructed us not to reply to Denise about the request or attempt to access any of her accounts.
“Contact the university through its official channels,” Elaine us not to reply to Denise about the request or attempt to access any of her accounts.
“Contact the university through its official channels,” Elaine said.
“Ask them to preserve the original submission, including its attachments, timestamps, and available technical records. Don't rely on screenshots alone.””
Dad wrote said.
“Ask them to preserve the original submission, including its attachments, timestamps, and available technical records. Don't rely on screenshots alone.””
Dad wrote everything down.
When the call ended, he stared at the table.
“I thought the worst thing I could do everything down.
When the call ended, he stared at the table.
“I thought the worst thing I could do to you was fail to be there after your mother died.””
I sat beside him.
“You were there.””
“Then to you was fail to be there after your mother died.””
I sat beside him.
“You were there.””
“Then I thought giving you a good home meant making sure you had everything you needed.””
He looked toward the stairs.
“I I thought giving you a good home meant making sure you had everything you needed.””
He looked toward the stairs.
“I never imagined I could put you in danger by trusting the wrong person.””
I took his hand.
“You didn't never imagined I could put you in danger by trusting the wrong person.””
I took his hand.
“You didn't put me in danger by loving someone.””
He squeezed my fingers.
“Maybe put me in danger by loving someone.””
He squeezed my fingers.
“Maybe not. But I should have paid attention to what that person was doing.””
For the first time since this nightmare began, I felt something other than fear.
I felt not. But I should have paid attention to what that person was doing.””
For the first time since this nightmare began, I felt something other than fear.
I felt angry.
Not the helpless anger I'd felt on the driveway, when Denise took my keys and everyone angry.
Not the helpless anger I'd felt on the driveway, when Denise took my keys and everyone watched.
This was different.
I had a university that was protecting my account. I had a lawyer who understood the watched.
This was different.
I had a university that was protecting my account. I had a lawyer who understood the trust documents. I had a father who was no longer willing to accept explanations that didn't make sense.
And I had the right to demand answers.
The following morning trust documents. I had a father who was no longer willing to accept explanations that didn't make sense.
And I had the right to demand answers.
The following morning, we met Elaine at the bank again.
She had received preliminary confirmation that the disputed education account transfers were under review. The bank, we met Elaine at the bank again.
She had received preliminary confirmation that the disputed education account transfers were under review. The bank had restricted further activity while it examined the authorization records.
The university had also confirmed that my funding redirection request was on hold.
But Elaine had another discovery.
“The lien against your mother's had restricted further activity while it examined the authorization records.
The university had also confirmed that my funding redirection request was on hold.
But Elaine had another discovery.
“The lien against your mother's house appears to be connected to a credit agreement,” she said, sliding a document across the table.
“Northstar's records refer to a business house appears to be connected to a credit agreement,” she said, sliding a document across the table.
“Northstar's records refer to a business loan associated with Jordan.””
Jordan's name appeared beneath the loan number.
Dad stared at it.
“Did he sign this?””
loan associated with Jordan.””
Jordan's name appeared beneath the loan number.
Dad stared at it.
“Did he sign this?””
“We don't know yet. The copy we received doesn't establish who signed the original agreement.””
I studied the document.
The“We don't know yet. The copy we received doesn't establish who signed the original agreement.””
I studied the document.
The loan had been issued for a business called JB Motor Ventures.
Jordan's initials.
His proposed dealership.
“Did he actually receive the loan had been issued for a business called JB Motor Ventures.
Jordan's initials.
His proposed dealership.
“Did he actually receive the money?”” I asked.
Elaine pointed to a section listing the disbursement instructions.
“Some funds were directed to an account associated with the money?”” I asked.
Elaine pointed to a section listing the disbursement instructions.
“Some funds were directed to an account associated with the business. Other payments went to separate recipients. We'll need the lender's records to determine business.
Other payments went to separate recipients. We'll need the lender's records to determine how the proceeds were distributed.””
Dad leaned forward.
“Can the house be taken from Maya how the proceeds were distributed.””
Dad leaned forward.
“Can the house be taken from Maya?””
“The lien creates a serious risk if it is valid and the debt remains unpaid. But its?””
“The lien creates a serious risk if it is valid and the debt remains unpaid. But its enforceability can be challenged if the underlying authorization was forged, invalid, or otherwise legally defective. We need the enforceability can be challenged if the underlying authorization was forged, invalid, or otherwise legally defective. We need the complete records before predicting the outcome.””
I stared at the amount again.
Sixty-eight thousand dollars.
My mother's house had been turned into collateral for a business that didn't even complete records before predicting the outcome.””
I stared at the amount again.
Sixty-eight thousand dollars.
My mother's house had been turned into collateral for a business that didn't even have a storefront.
I thought of Jordan bragging about becoming an entrepreneur.
I thought of Denise telling Dad that Jordan needed the car more than I did.
Had she been have a storefront.
I thought of Jordan bragging about becoming an entrepreneur.
I thought of Denise telling Dad that Jordan needed the car more than I did.
Had she been trying to give him the means to run away from the consequences of the loan? Or had she simply assumed she could keep taking from me until there was trying to give him the means to run away from the consequences of the loan? Or had she simply assumed she could keep taking from me until there was nothing left?
A bank investigator joined us by phone later that morning.
He explained that the institution was reviewing several disputed transfers and that it would not nothing left?
A bank investigator joined us by phone later that morning.
He explained that the institution was reviewing several disputed transfers and that it would not release detailed conclusions until the review was complete.
Then he asked Dad a question.
“Did anyone else have authority to manage your electronic banking release detailed conclusions until the review was complete.
Then he asked Dad a question.
“Did anyone else have authority to manage your electronic banking credentials?””
“No,” Dad replied.
“My wife knew where I kept some household records, but credentials?””
“No,” Dad replied.
“My wife knew where I kept some household records, but I never knowingly authorized her to make these transfers.””
“Did you receive verification messages when the transfers occurred?””
“I I never knowingly authorized her to make these transfers.””
“Did you receive verification messages when the transfers occurred?””
“I don't remember receiving any.””
The investigator explained that the records would be examined.
When the call ended, Elaine closed the folder.
“We need to separate what don't remember receiving any.””
The investigator explained that the records would be examined.
When the call ended, Elaine closed the folder.
“We need to separate what we know from what we suspect.””
She wrote three headings on a notepad.
*Education account.*
*Property lien.*
**University we know from what we suspect.””
She wrote three headings on a notepad.
*Education account.*
*Property lien.*
*University funding request.*
“Each of these matters may involve different transactions, documents, and legal questions,” she said.
“We need to establish how they connect without assuming that every suspicious event funding request.**
“Each of these matters may involve different transactions, documents, and legal questions,” she said.
“We need to establish how they connect without assuming that every suspicious event has the same explanation.””
Dad nodded.
I understood why she was being careful.
Denise had spent years making sure that every has the same explanation.””
Dad nodded.
I understood why she was being careful.
Denise had spent years making sure that every problem looked like an isolated misunderstanding.
The car was a family disagreement.
The education account was a temporary loan.
The house paperwork was routine administration.
The university request was something I problem looked like an isolated misunderstanding.
The car was a family disagreement.
The education account was a temporary loan.
The house paperwork was routine administration.
The university request was something I supposedly misunderstood.
Each explanation sounded almost believable when considered alone.
Together, they formed a pattern that was becoming harder supposedly misunderstood.
Each explanation sounded almost believable when considered alone.
Together, they formed a pattern that was becoming harder to ignore.
When we returned home that afternoon, Jordan was waiting in the driveway.
He stood beside the garage, holding a thick envelope.
“I need to talk to you,” he said to Dad to ignore.
When we returned home that afternoon, Jordan was waiting in the driveway.
He stood beside the garage, holding a thick envelope.
“I need to talk to you,” he said to Dad.
Dad unlocked the front door.
“Then come inside.””
Jordan followed us into the kitchen. He looked exhausted. His shirt.
Dad unlocked the front door.
“Then come inside.””
Jordan followed us into the kitchen. He looked exhausted. His shirt was wrinkled, his hair uncombed, and he kept rubbing his thumb along the edge of the envelope.
He placed it on the table.
“It's from North was wrinkled, his hair uncombed, and he kept rubbing his thumb along the edge of the envelope.
He placed it on the table.
“It's from Northstar.””
Dad didn't touch it.
“Where did you get it?””
“It came in the mail yesterday. Mom told me notstar.””
Dad didn't touch it.
“Where did you get it?””
“It came in the mail yesterday. Mom told me not to open it until she got home, but I did.””
“What does it say?””
Jordan swallowed.
“They're demanding payment on the business loan.””
“Did you know the loan to open it until she got home, but I did.””
“What does it say?””
Jordan swallowed.
“They're demanding payment on the business loan.””
“Did you know the loan was secured against Maya's house?””
His eyes darted toward me.
“No.””
“Did you know money from Maya's education account was was secured against Maya's house?””
His eyes darted toward me.
“No.””
“Did you know money from Maya's education account was transferred to your account?””
Jordan hesitated.
“I knew Mom sent me money.””
“That wasn't my question.””
He transferred to your account?””
Jordan hesitated.
“I knew Mom sent me money.””
“That wasn't my question.””
He lowered his head.
“She said it was money you were giving me to get started.””
Dad's voice remained steady lowered his head.
“She said it was money you were giving me to get started.””
Dad's voice remained steady.
“Did you ever ask me for it?””
“No.””
“Did I ever tell you I was investing in your business?””
“No.””
“Then.
“Did you ever ask me for it?””
“No.””
“Did I ever tell you I was investing in your business?””
“No.””
“Then why did you believe her?””
Jordan's face reddened.
“Because she's my mother!””
The why did you believe her?””
Jordan's face reddened.
“Because she's my mother!””
The answer hung in the room.
For a moment, I saw something familiar in him. He had been protected answer hung in the room.
For a moment, I saw something familiar in him. He had been protected by Denise for so long that he had stopped asking whether the protection was deserved.
He looked at me.
“I didn't know she was using your college money.””
“But by Denise for so long that he had stopped asking whether the protection was deserved.
He looked at me.
“I didn't know she was using your college money.””
“But you knew you were receiving money from Dad without asking him.””
He opened his mouth, then shut it.
Finally, he said, you knew you were receiving money from Dad without asking him.””
He opened his mouth, then shut it.
Finally, he said, “I should have asked.””
It wasn't an apology, but it was the first honest thing I'd heard him say.
Dad opened “I should have asked.””
It wasn't an apology, but it was the first honest thing I'd heard him say.
Dad opened the envelope.
Inside were copies of the loan agreement, a repayment demand, and a list of disbursements.
Elaine had told the envelope.
Inside were copies of the loan agreement, a repayment demand, and a list of disbursements.
Elaine had told us to preserve any relevant documents, so Dad photographed every page before reading them.
The final sheet us to preserve any relevant documents, so Dad photographed every page before reading them.
The final sheet listed a payment of $9,700 to a recipient identified listed a payment of $9,700 to a recipient identified only by a transaction reference.
Jordan leaned over.
“I don't recognize that name.””
Dad looked at the entry.
“Neither do I.””
I pointed to the date.
“That's the same week Denise told me she was only by a transaction reference.
Jordan leaned over.
“I don't recognize that name.””
Dad looked at the entry.
“Neither do I.””
I pointed to the date.
“That's the same week Denise told me she was updating Mom's trust paperwork.””
Nobody spoke.
Dad turned another page.
At the bottom was a note indicating that an additional authorization had been submitted in support of the loan.
It updating Mom's trust paperwork.””
Nobody spoke.
Dad turned another page.
At the bottom was a note indicating that an additional authorization had been submitted in support of the loan.
It referenced a separate document.
A document Jordan said referenced a separate document.
A document Jordan said he'd never seen.
Dad picked up his phone and called Elaine.
When she answered, he explained that we'd received the lender's demand and asked whether she could review the new records.
She told him to bring the original envelope and not he'd never seen.
Dad picked up his phone and called Elaine.
When she answered, he explained that we'd received the lender's demand and asked whether she could review the new records.
She told him to bring the original envelope and not to contact Northstar directly until she'd examined the agreement.
Then she asked him to read the title of the authorization referenced on the final page.
Dad did.
Elaine went silent.
“Marcus,” she said carefully to contact Northstar directly until she'd examined the agreement.
Then she asked him to read the title of the authorization referenced on the final page.
Dad did.
Elaine went silent.
“Marcus,” she said carefully, “that document may be the missing link. I need to see it immediately.””
Dad looked at me.
I knew what he was thinking.
The paperwork I'd, “that document may be the missing link. I need to see it immediately.””
Dad looked at me.
I knew what he was thinking.
The paperwork I'd signed as a seventeen-year-old might have been used to support a loan against my mother's house.
But as Dad signed as a seventeen-year-old might have been used to support a loan against my mother's house.
But as Dad gathered the documents, Jordan spoke again.
“There was something else.””
We all turned toward him.
He looked frightened now.
“Mom told me that if anyone asked about the money, I was gathered the documents, Jordan spoke again.
“There was something else.””
We all turned toward him.
He looked frightened now.
“Mom told me that if anyone asked about the money, I was supposed to say it came from a private investor.””
Dad stared at him.
“Why?””
Jordan's voice cracked.
“Because she said if supposed to say it came from a private investor.””
Dad stared at him.
“Why?””
Jordan's voice cracked.
“Because she said if the family found out where it really came from, everything would fall apart.””
He opened his phone and sc the family found out where it really came from, everything would fall apart.””
He opened his phone and scrolled through his messages.
“I thought she meant you'd be angry that I was starting a business.””
Herolled through his messages.
“I thought she meant you'd be angry that I was starting a business.””
He placed the phone on the table.
A message from Denise was displayed on the screen.
*Don't tell Marcus about Northstar. If Maya placed the phone on the table.
A message from Denise was displayed on the screen.
Don't tell Marcus about Northstar. If Maya asks, say the money was a gift. I'll take care of the paperwork.
Below it was another message, sent the following week.
Whatever happens, don't mention asks, say the money was a gift. I'll take care of the paperwork.
Below it was another message, sent the following week.
Whatever happens, don't mention the second account.
Dad read it twice.
“What second account?”” I whispered.
Jordan shook his head.
“I don't know.””
But when he looked at me, I saw that he was hiding something else.
“Jordan the second account.*
Dad read it twice.
“What second account?”” I whispered.
Jordan shook his head.
“I don't know.””
But when he looked at me, I saw that he was hiding something else.
“Jordan,” Dad said, “if you know anything that could help us understand what happened, now is the time to say it.””
Jordan stared at his phone.
Then he slowly turned the screen toward,” Dad said, “if you know anything that could help us understand what happened, now is the time to say it.””
Jordan stared at his phone.
Then he slowly turned the screen toward us again.
There was another message.
This one had been sent by Denise on the morning of my graduation.
*Get the car if you can. I need Maya away from us again.
There was another message.
This one had been sent by Denise on the morning of my graduation.
Get the car if you can. I need Maya away from the bank statements until I finish moving the rest.
I felt the blood drain from my face.
the bank statements until I finish moving the rest.*
I felt the blood drain from my face.
Dad didn't move.
Jordan whispered, “I thought she meant your car was the easiest way to keep youDad didn't move.
Jordan whispered, “I thought she meant your car was the easiest way to keep you busy.””
I looked at my father.
The keys. The shove. The humiliation in front of the neighbors.
It hadn't been just entitlement.
Denise had wanted me busy.””
I looked at my father.
The keys. The shove. The humiliation in front of the neighbors.
It hadn't been just entitlement.
Denise had wanted me distracted.
And whatever she was trying to move, she hadn't finished.
May you like
distracted.
And whatever she was trying to move, she hadn't finished.
